14 thoughts on “A Cheese Stick Funeral

  1. What a sad dreary story today. Without any ifs and buts and twisters I did not see either. Everything o.k. flash?
    Destiny is cruel, but no one is protected from it … you can only be grateful if it does not hit you.

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      1. writing, writing, words words words. has a very good sense! For me it was not at first glance to see. But then, …. the narrator feels guilty and the members of the family all react in a special way. The story is even shorter and without distractions, so you can discover this.

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    1. Thank you! yeah when Nikita finished the picture I was impressed, per usual. I’m glad you liked this one. I was trying to get across a feeling or a complicated mess of feelings without writing a complicated mess of a story. I am glad it came out well.

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      1. I was actually just talking to a friend about something like this. I call it the Jaws effect: the less the audience sees, the harder it hits sometimes.


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