What’s this? hahaha, I’m sorry, that I always have to laugh. It is just always so incredibly crazy at first sight .
Very good with many profound sentences and / or funny phrases. What a brilliant invention this anti-strip club. Who likes to go to a strip club? But an anti-strip club is a good thing. Get rid of the old image and a new one ….. yes healing arms … we even help, but keep the most important thing, the naked woman, just twisted order ….. twisted like!
I have to ponder my favorite saying of Pippi Longstocking “I make the world, as I like it” I believe…. once again go through the head.
She danced in the way a piece of asparagus falls on the ground, but sexier …. we had something similar in an older story … she danced like a brick as falling in a boat … or something like that ….
Haha I am glad you enjoyed it. Also I never read any pippi longstocking as a kid but she sounds quite profound. And yeah I think you’re right. In the story “the party of today” but I can’t remember exactly what was in there
Astrid Lindgren is one of my favorit childrenbookauthors. Pippi is fun,for me, her slogan was always a great example….but here, with you I realize, that this slogan does not work always….there can be born things like anti-strip-clubs…: )
I wanted to reread “the party of today” but could not find it, do you know the date?… I think it was a street party, a woman spilled the beer and danced around a cute, curled child, in a strange way … you observed it from a restaurant?
I hope it came through, that I really think such an ati-strip-club is totally weak-minded….just watching the film of stripping girl backwards and create the right to make the opposite in naming.But a really grandios,cheap idea, Flash!
PS For a long time it has been on my mind that your characters with close relationship to the protagonist (and paticularly familial characters) reminds me of the dialogue in Dave Eggers *A Heartbreaking Work of Staggering Genius*.
Unless you hate him – then you sound nothing like that bastard.
Hahaha thank you. Honestly I only ever read his forward to infinite jest then, honestly didn’t get all the way through infinite jest. But from the forward I did but one of his books but I haven’t been home since. If you’d recommend him I’ll see if I can find a copy of something of his here in russia. Or maybe online.
I’ve only read the expert from A Heartbreaking Work of Staggering Genius, but what I read was just….bliss: great black humor, brutal sadness, complicated relationships… You can find the excerpt online.
Also, who the hell *could* get through DFW masturbatory (as my mother described it)Infinite Jest?? Loved all his essays, though, especially Trip to the Fair (in the Atlantic, I think) and his essay on tennis great Federer. Glorious.
haha yeah I have read and enjoyed a couple of his essays and shorter works. I haven’t read trip to the fair though. I will find it and I will look for some Eggers. An excerpt if I can’t find a full book.
Haha thank you. I think this came to mind while I was in Vegas. It is just such a strange place. It made me so curious as to what might be hiding around all the corners I didn’t check.
Superb. Great concept, great writing and just a cool story. The line “She danced in the way a piece of asparagus falls on the ground, but sexier” could be the funniest and most-weirdly-perfect line I’ve ever read!!
Did this really happen or was this a story? I am heading to Vegas soon I think I would find this strip club fascinating!!
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Haha sorry no I just made it up. I wouldn’t certainly be curious to see a place like this if they ever existed
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You don’t have to be sorry about having made it up it’s a great story I’m just sorry I won’t get to go there LOL
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What’s this? hahaha, I’m sorry, that I always have to laugh. It is just always so incredibly crazy at first sight .
Very good with many profound sentences and / or funny phrases. What a brilliant invention this anti-strip club. Who likes to go to a strip club? But an anti-strip club is a good thing. Get rid of the old image and a new one ….. yes healing arms … we even help, but keep the most important thing, the naked woman, just twisted order ….. twisted like!
I have to ponder my favorite saying of Pippi Longstocking “I make the world, as I like it” I believe…. once again go through the head.
She danced in the way a piece of asparagus falls on the ground, but sexier …. we had something similar in an older story … she danced like a brick as falling in a boat … or something like that ….
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Haha I am glad you enjoyed it. Also I never read any pippi longstocking as a kid but she sounds quite profound. And yeah I think you’re right. In the story “the party of today” but I can’t remember exactly what was in there
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Astrid Lindgren is one of my favorit childrenbookauthors. Pippi is fun,for me, her slogan was always a great example….but here, with you I realize, that this slogan does not work always….there can be born things like anti-strip-clubs…: )
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haha yes, there is no telling what people are likely to create
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I wanted to reread “the party of today” but could not find it, do you know the date?… I think it was a street party, a woman spilled the beer and danced around a cute, curled child, in a strange way … you observed it from a restaurant?
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yeah, I think it was some time in June. on the left hand side of the website there is a search bar where you can look for specific stories.
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ohh god to know, thank you….
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I hope it came through, that I really think such an ati-strip-club is totally weak-minded….just watching the film of stripping girl backwards and create the right to make the opposite in naming.But a really grandios,cheap idea, Flash!
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Hahaha the weird thing is this could probably be a thing.
P.S I laughed pretty good at the dancing like asparagus part.
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Haha yeah I think it probably will be someday. Who knows, there are so many absurd ideas and businesses out there these days. I’m glad you enjoyed it
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This was really nice 🙂
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Thank you very much, glad you liked it.
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Your imagination is a wonder to behold. ☺☺☺
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PS For a long time it has been on my mind that your characters with close relationship to the protagonist (and paticularly familial characters) reminds me of the dialogue in Dave Eggers *A Heartbreaking Work of Staggering Genius*.
Unless you hate him – then you sound nothing like that bastard.
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Hahaha thank you. Honestly I only ever read his forward to infinite jest then, honestly didn’t get all the way through infinite jest. But from the forward I did but one of his books but I haven’t been home since. If you’d recommend him I’ll see if I can find a copy of something of his here in russia. Or maybe online.
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I’ve only read the expert from A Heartbreaking Work of Staggering Genius, but what I read was just….bliss: great black humor, brutal sadness, complicated relationships… You can find the excerpt online.
Also, who the hell *could* get through DFW masturbatory (as my mother described it)Infinite Jest?? Loved all his essays, though, especially Trip to the Fair (in the Atlantic, I think) and his essay on tennis great Federer. Glorious.
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haha yeah I have read and enjoyed a couple of his essays and shorter works. I haven’t read trip to the fair though. I will find it and I will look for some Eggers. An excerpt if I can’t find a full book.
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Haha thank you. I think this came to mind while I was in Vegas. It is just such a strange place. It made me so curious as to what might be hiding around all the corners I didn’t check.
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Superb. Great concept, great writing and just a cool story. The line “She danced in the way a piece of asparagus falls on the ground, but sexier” could be the funniest and most-weirdly-perfect line I’ve ever read!!
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Haha thank you. I’m really glad I could make you laugh and happy you enjoyed the story. It was a really random idea.
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From my experience those are generally the best ones!
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