The Scent of a Carrot


“Do you have any carrots?” she asks.

I frown, out of breath.



My mind comes back from wherever it was. I let it out of bed and it goes riffling through the refrigerator.

I nod.



She gets up without bothering to put her clothes back on. I watch her go, light a cigarette. I start to wonder–start to worry what she plans to do with the carrot.

She is back in three drags–in bed in two.

“You wanted a carrot?”

“Sh–” she tells me. Not shhh, but sh.

She breaks it in half, holds one end to her nose. She closes her eyes. The sun is at her back; she looks as though we are making love all over again.

I smoke my cigarette.

I don’t dare speak in fear of a sh. So, I wait. The cigarette is ash by the time she opens her eyes. She puts the carrot down.

She smiles.

“What?” is all I can ask. She takes a bite of the carrot, hands me the other half. I crack off a bit.

“Mayans,” she says, pulling her blanket up and around her. I pull it away, off of her. She frowns.

“It’s cold,” she says. I sigh, letting go of the blanket.

She leaves it where it is.

“So,” I say, “Mayans?”

“Yes, Mayans.”

“They liked carrots?”

She shakes her head. “No, the Mayans always had these belts with different bags. In each bag there was a smell. Each smell was a memory. You know how memory is linked to smell, yes?”

“I suppose, yeah.”

“Well,” she shrugs, “whenever there is a really great moment in my life, I smell a carrot. I never buy or eat carrots except when I am in the best moments, the moments that need to be underlined.”

I try to keep my face placid–it doesn’t sell.

“You’re making fun of me,” she says.

I hold up my hands–like a crook. “I’m not, I’m really not,” I promise. “I just–well, it’s just odd. I like odd. But, why carrots?”

She looks past me, past the bedroom, past even the refrigerator; she talks to whatever she finds there.

“The first moment I remember being aware that I’m alive, I was in the grocery store with my mother. My very first memory, you know–and it was a good one. I remember it the way some people talk about finding God–don’t laugh–I mean, not finding God, but like that. That look people get where they know something ineffable happened to them once and don’t quite know what to do about it.” Her voice slows and stops, as a song might.

She takes her time coming back to me. I wait, hoping she brings with her something for me to say.

I light another cigarette.

“Oh,” she says, when she gets back. “We were in the vegetable aisle.”


Author: Flash-365

Author Benjamin Davis and artist Nikita Klimov created one story and one picture each day for one year. In May 2018 they published their first book, The King of FU

18 thoughts

  1. Can I tell you my experience of this? At first I had this thought that there was a “being weird for weird’s sake” but I couldn’t stop reading. Then, it became one of my fav approaches to romance that I’ve read in a long time, because I am sick to death of reading about love and relationships. This one made me the opposite of sick. And I don’t like any semblance of lovey dovey stuff usually. This was subtle and uniquely effective and I apologize for my initial reaction to it. I was wrong. 🙂

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    1. Thank you very much. That’s really nice to hear. I too don’t like super sappy lovey Dover romance. Whenever I do write about people or situations that could be like that I try very hard not to fall into that trap because it’s often not the reason why I am writing it.

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  2. Ohh, a very harmonic, sweet lovestory….first I was frightened, what could happen with this carrot, but thankfully nothing cruel happend. And again I had a lot to laugh about skepsis and a little bit strange and rough sh-woman! bravo Flash, I love!

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      1. You’re making fun of me, Flash? You say “no darkness in this one” and you are glad, that you could help “clinock”, when he sais: “your carrots saw me through the dark…”….hmmmm???

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