N and I stand outside a bar called Bukowski. It is across from our apartment. A girl plods on past. She is crying; her whole body is crying. She is wearing rainbow socks. I pass N my cigarette. He takes a couple drags.
“Do you need a cigarette?” someone asks N. We turn. A man with two dark eyes is holding his pack out to N. N holds up his hand, politely.
“I’m trying to quit.”
The dark eyed man frowns.
“Why?”
N shrugs. “Death?” he wonders, taking a couple more drags off of my cigarette. The dark eyed man looks around the street. He laughs.
“What else is there to do in this city but die!” he says, suddenly. “All these people saying quit, quit, quit!”
He spits. “Why don’t they leave us alone. Everything here will kill you here; the roads, the cars, the water, the air, your neighbors. hell! Dennis killed all his neighbors with a base guitar.”
He motions to the man beside him. He has a patchy beard and glass eyes. He nods.
I smile, nervously. N takes another drag from my cigarette. The dark eyed man crosses both his arms, cigarette hanging from the corner of his mouth.
“You know, people always saying; no smoking, no smoking, NO SMOKING! You know, the other day I was in the park and I saw a man smoking. And, you know you can’t smoke in the park.”
N nods. I shrug.
“Well, he was smoking. So, just to see what it feels like, I went right up to him and said ‘you know buddy–I even said buddy–I said, buddy, there is no smoking in the park,’ I told him. You know, just to see what it would feel like.”
He puffs away.
“And?” I ask.
“And what do you think! I felt awful, terrible! The man just looked at me; saw straight through to my asshole, which is what I was, an asshole. I threw up all over the poor man.”
N makes a face. The dark-eyed man is all worked up. His face is red. His glass-eyed friend pats him on the back, comforting.
“Asshole,” his friend says, softly, motherly. The dark eyed man looks about to cry.
N finishes my cigarette.
What is it about your stories that makes them so interesting? Trivial bits of life, much of it described by people who are not altogether sober about people who are altogether not sober. Fascinating!
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Haha, often written by someone who is not altogether sober. I’m not sure why these exchanges fascinate me so much. Most of my stories are based on actual events. But my mind always exaggerates the parts of them that confuse or interest me. It’s not really intentional. Its how I remember them most of the time.
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Something lovely and shattered in here.
Love.
It.
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Thank you. Happy to hear it.
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I laughed when he threw up on the guy. Thank you.
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haha always happy to hear when I make someone laugh. Thank you
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It sounds like Dennis needs new strings. The E string get particularly deadly when it gets old; you know, really grouchy.
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Oh I know, that damn E string. Maybe he could borrow one from his neighbors…
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Dark and edgy. Very nice.
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Thank you. It’s a bit of an exaggerated version of a worryingly similar conversation haha.
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This is great dude
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haha, thank you. Glad you enjoyed it.
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Quit Smoking .. this
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is the key
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very true
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