What Happened When Frank Died: Zombies

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Ben & Nikita

45 Comments

  1. The world of the blog stream seems to be predicated on collecting ‘likes’ and warm affirming comments. So would it be OK this time if I said that this one I didn’t like. Now I can get on with my day and wait for tomorrow’s post. It’s like when you stay in bed all day with a hangover and look forward to getting up tomorrow to go visit a friend.

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    1. Haha I don’t mind at all. I don’t expect all my work to hit home with people. I’m actually a little worried I’m running out of ideas for Frank stories. And I started this whole thing to get better so when something doesn’t work it is beneficial for me to hear it. Thank you. Ill see what I can work up for tomorrow.

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    2. Do you mind if I bug you for a little more criticism. I value your opinion a lot and I want to know where I went wrong. Was it the plot or the writing or the flow? I really want to keep the frank series going but I want to keep it good.

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      1. No it wasn’t the flow, or the writing. I think you’ve got a hold on that. Many of your posts are ridiculously funny and certainly exemplify the whole “Willing suspension of disbelief” but it is just me. I think the ‘zombie’ concept is so unbelievable it just doesn’t work. I’m happy if Frank wanders around as a ghost and interferes in peoples lives but don’t turn him into a zombie. That’s just a personal thing. You keep going as you are and don’t let me change you.

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      2. Fair enough. Thank you for the feedback. I stayed away from zombie frank for a long time because zombies aren’t really my thing. But I wrote a different frank today then just couldn’t get it right. So I wrote this to give the other story time to sit in my head.

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      3. Just read through it. You are much too kind. I am currently drinking canned gin and tonics trapped on an island in St. Petersburg. When I get home tomorrow I will give those a read. I can see from the titles I’ve read a few of them already. I am looking forward to it.

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      4. Man after my own heart. Unfortunately the sketchy store we found didn’t have any whisky. Or as most whisky bottles in russia say: “whisky flavored alcohol”

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    1. No worries. The idea behind Frank is to try every conceivable idea of what might happen after death. So zombie was on my list.
      Oh, if there is a particular religion you know of with an interesting afterlife I could research, that would be great. And thank you. There is no need apologize for not liking something. It helps me to hear it.

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  2. Not much of a one for zombie stories, so can’t say I think this is one of your best. And I started this whole thing to get better so when something doesn’t work it is beneficial for me to hear it.

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  3. Just read through it. And I started this whole thing to get better so when something doesn’t work it is beneficial for me to hear it.

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  4. Earlier today while driving my way to the grocery store, I passed by a cemetery. I suddenly (and funnily) thought about zombies and what if my mom who passed away five years ago becomes one. I began wishing that I wouldn’t see her roaming around–and then–I started to feel sad.

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  5. It wasn’t horrible. I just found it a bit boring to read, it was not all that exciting. I mostly kept reading to see if it would get better. MAYBE try to add more detail? Just a suggestion. Other then that, keep it up.

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    1. Thank you. I think you’re right. I’d refrained from the zombie genre for a while and I think this is one of my weaker stories. I don’t want to abandon it. I plan to go back to all my stories at the end of the year and see how I can improve. I’ll be coming back to this comment when I do.

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  6. For sure!! Definitely, don’t give up on it if it’s something you like to write about. I think it’s a very good idea and I really think that you can make something of it. 🙂 🙂 you’re truly not a bad writer.

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    1. Before I forget it again, a great illustration! Oha, Zombies … I’ve never had anything to do with it … hmmmm … someone screeming turns them on. OK. They have no sensory organ left. Thank you for wrtiting, what they wanted to say……..

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    1. Yeah. I agree with you. I haven’t written about zombies before or since. The topic doesn’t grab me. But since each frank story examines a possible afterlife scenario it had to be done haha.

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      1. If it does not grab you, do not Follower it. Even if I know nothing about Zombies ( and actually do not want to know) I think your Frank-Stories are too good for serving a Zombie Story. If you want you should try it in another way, like you did with your erotic Stories.

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      2. why not, you did an erotic one,( not Frank but other story). This was a good one….but who knows, there are lot´s of zombie fans ,probably they are very excieded about a zombie one…; )

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      3. Yeah, this one got a more mixed reaction than any of my other Franks. I wasn’t happy or unhappy with it. I guess I just figured it had to be done if I was going to examine all the possibilities.

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  7. And I started this whole thing to get better so when something doesn’t work it is beneficial for me to hear it. Not much of a one for zombie stories, so can’t say I think this is one of your best.

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  8. And I started this whole thing to get better so when something doesn’t work it is beneficial for me to hear it. And I started this whole thing to get better so when something doesn’t work it is beneficial for me to hear it.

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