And Then This Happened

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Little Red Jacket with a Hood: Part II

I’m not saying I’ve never been tied to a bed with a woman on top of me. But usually, she’s got a different sort of hunger in her eyes.

The girl in the red jacket looks down at me. “I see you’ve met my grandmother,” she says, smiling.

I nod. “She’s lovely,” I mutter. The girl laughs. She bends down and kisses my neck, gently. Then, licks it. She licks it over and over. It tickles and turns me on at the same time. My body is confused, my mind, doubly so.

“What the fuck is going on!” I yell. I almost never yell. The girl sits back up, laughing.

“Cleaning you. Would you eat a steak that’s been wandering around in the muck and filth all day? Hm?”

I don’t know why I expected anything else. I frown at her.

“Great. So, you’re going to eat me, then?”

“Oh no, not me,” she winks, “I picked up something at the store.”

She smiles at something behind the bed.

“Oh Grandmother,” she says, “what big ears you have!”

I look up and lock eyes with the old woman, upside down. Her ears are curving up and back. I can hear the little bones cracking as they go. I slam my eyes shut.

“Oh fuck this, so hard, why me, why me? This isn’t happening,” I try to block out the sound of little bones cracking as the girl straddling me, giggles, and says,

“And, grandmother, what big eyes you have!”

She laughs out loud.

“Oh! And grandmother, what big hands you have!”

The sharp tips of hair covered fingers pull my eyes open. Something flops down onto my chest. A gnarly gray wig. The girl straddling me picks it up and places it on her head.

She puts both hands to her cheeks and looks above me. I feel like vomiting, or crying. I slowly raise my eyes and look as the girl says, “Oh! But, grandmother, what a terrible big mouth you have!”

I look up. If the word horror has a face, this is it.

Then it happens, like slipping on new socks. Fangs dip into my neck. My body goes numb; my brain goes swimming. Somewhere in the distance, someone is clapping. Then, the most intense pleasure I’ve ever felt floods into my body.

I pass out.

To be continued…

Posted in flash fiction

Author Benjamin Davis and artist Nikita Klimov created one story and one picture each day for one year. In May 2018 they published their first book, The King of FU

18 Comment on “And Then This Happened”

  1. http://www.salpa58.wordpress.com January 23, 2017 at 5:25 pm

    Little Red Riding Hood? :o) Or, maybe a vampire?

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    1. Flash365 January 23, 2017 at 5:57 pm

      A bit of a cocktail. Though maybe not vampires. I’m not too sure. This is the second part of the story

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      1. http://www.salpa58.wordpress.com January 23, 2017 at 6:12 pm

        I am sure it will be interesting. :o)

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      2. the prosateur January 24, 2017 at 9:27 am

        Can you link to the 1st part? I missed it and it looks like i missed something good!

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  3. koolaidmoms January 23, 2017 at 5:57 pm

    Wow. Can’t wait to read more.

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    1. Flash365 January 24, 2017 at 11:47 am

      This next one will wrap it up. I’m not sure what the next series will be but hopefully it elicits the same reaction. Thanks for reading.

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  4. Harry January 23, 2017 at 6:29 pm

    Full on and intense this time, good stuff, as ever. Nice to see something even weirder and darker, aha.

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    1. Flash365 January 24, 2017 at 11:45 am

      haha glad you like it. This might be my weirdest/darkest series. We’ll see after today. I really enjoy just letting loose and writing whatever the hell comes into my head and just seeing how weird or dark it can get.

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  5. Phil Ryan January 23, 2017 at 6:34 pm

    ‘someone is clapping’
    I feared, when you first met the red jacketed girl, the clap might take a bow in this story, flash365. How do you extricate yourself from this predicament? Can I suggest an early posting for tomorrow’s episode. I’m willing to stay up till just beyond midnight 🙂

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    1. Flash365 January 24, 2017 at 11:45 am

      haha unfortunately our schedules make it so that we can’t post until evening. (here.) With the time difference it gets posted much earlier for other people. Our average time of posting is around 9pm.

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  6. lumosvox January 23, 2017 at 7:10 pm

    I definitely like this version of Red Riding Hood.

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    1. Flash365 January 24, 2017 at 11:43 am

      Yeah, a bit less kid friendly haha

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    1. Flash365 January 24, 2017 at 11:43 am

      I’m glad. It was just an idea I had that I ran with. Only three parts. The third part will be up today.

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      1. jmwwriting January 24, 2017 at 11:46 am

        Everything starts with just an idea!

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  8. marvel September 26, 2017 at 7:29 pm

    ahhhh…cruel!

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